Instructing the maid to send the guest in, he kept aside his spectacles to divert his attention to the incoming visitor.
The door opened and entered an out of breath vibrant girl in her mid twenties who looked rather harrowed for her personality.
‘Hello Sir. I’m Ruchi' she said and extended her hand.
The famous detective he was, troubled people often came in to seek his help, though they weren't usually half as attractive. His forte lay in spying or gathering evidence on cheating spouses. Course other more out in the open sources, like ‘Emotional Atyachar’ had tried to play a dent in his popularity but hadn’t succeeded much thus far. He certainly maintained tag for being best in the business.
Before he could ask the girl reason for her dropping by, she delved into all explanations herself. She suspected her husband was cheating on her.
‘Office Secretary?’, he volunteered.
Ruchi vehemently nodded her head to indicate a yes and her eyes showed deep gratitude for now being convinced of coming to the right place.
‘But you will help me no, sir?’, she asked with pleading in her eyes.
Chinnatambi examined her countenance. The girl sure blinked a lot and as she talked a deep dimple showed in her cheeks to every time she pronounced the letter ‘e’. Now you may want to know that he wasn’t the type of person to be swayed by any easy on the eyes woman who barged in at odd hours but she was different. Less for the features and more for the sadness that now reflected in her eyes that you could surely tell were used to dancing with happiness.
An extreme sympathy, that’s what he felt for her. Had it been another person, he would have asked her to come again the following day, but this time or this person rather, he did not want to disappoint. He was going to have to use all his super awesome detective skills to get to the bottom of this matter.
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Where would this frightfully attractive woman go in the middle of the night to a husband who sounded scary and unforgiving at the very least? He worried for her safety and being the chivalrous gentleman he was, offered for her to stay as he went to meet this nasty husband of hers. Ruchi’s eyes filled with gratitude and the thus far elusive dimple cut into her cheeks at which Chinnatambi found it hard to contain his appreciation for the most gorgeous smile he had ever seen. In the meantime, she gave her address and thanked him profusely for being the considerate man he was.
Two hours later as he entered his house, the door was left ajar, the maid disappeared, safe broken and the entire house relieved of its valuables.
But obviously Miss Ruchi was nowhere to be seen.
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Calls himself a detective!!!!!
Bleh!
That was pretty much the easiest target in my five years of business!
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‘And may I speak with the girl in red please!’
He waited as the superintendent held out the phone to the girl.
‘Yes!’, spoke a gruff irritated girl’s voice at the other end.
‘Oh hello miss! I trust you've had an eventful evening. Might I suggest, the next time you intend on robbing a house please ensure your address isn't the same as the one put down by the housemaid in her bio-data. It was a pleasure meeting you. Pretty girls ought not to stay in unpleasant places.’, he said and hung up.
Seriously! Over smart girls are just so tiresome.
No sugar cookie ain’t beating the best just yet!, he thought and smiled to himself.
********THE END*********
The real Ruchi *my sweeto sis*, I understand won't be too happy to read this. So here's a publicity pitch.
Visit her blog at Kamikaze Speaks. You're gonna louuuuve it :-)
27 comments:
Initially I was wondering what the post is about but the events kept me engrossed...Move over CID,Karamchand...... Sadiya is here!
I was searching for ACP, Daya and Abhijeet. None of them were found at the crime site.
Your post was sticky. :P
he hehe i thought this was going to be some adventure finding out who the lover was .. but hey the girls had a clever idea..
they do say people make silly mistakes ... well next time i ma sure they will cover there tracks..
The spy was good to add two and two together he is indeed intelligent ..
Loved the story :)
Bikram's
Dumb maid. Lucky Detective.
Cheers
CRD
Hahahha, ah these blondes, kabhi nahi sudharengi :D
aur ye ladke bhi na bas, ye bhi nahi sudharne waale :P
Awesome post.
Cheers,
Blasphemous Aesthete
Reminds me of Sherlock Holmes & that lady who got away..forgot her name..she was the only one ever to outsmart the detective.
But our detective here is too smart I see :D
Hahaha...dumb women! Lovely narration, Sadia. Loved that dimple smile when eeeeeeeeee:P Great post!
uuiii...wht a detective! can give Sherlock Holmes a competition :P
and yes..pretty girls can be really dangerous...but guys wont learn it. sigh.
good wrk :)
sarah
Excellent bosss.... Ruchi was smart... the maid was over smart!!!
The maid was smarter than Ruchi!
A truly WOW post.=D
ha ha...funny......may ne girls are always like this ;0
Hahahahaha great post :D Loved reading it!
gud stuff :)
@ alka- hehe no. zyada se zyada i can cum up to d level of fredrick or miss kitty's assistant.
@ prateek- i dunno wat a sticky post is, bt it sure sounds bad.
*depressed* :P
@ bikrammmm- hehe ya dey arent in jail eider. nex tym wil avoid a detective's hous n cum directly to u. :)
@ crd- kya lukcy. thoda sa brain bhi to use kiya na usne!
@ anshul- oye tumhe kaise pata wo blonde thi??
wo movie ka dialogue hai na. ye umar sudharne ki nahi bigadne ki hai :o
@ rinayaaaa- scandal in bohemia- irene adler!
its my fevretestttt sherlock holmes story. in fact she's dere in d movie too.
@ nivedita- hehe. eeeee thnx :)
@ sarahhh- haaa i agree. nex time grl ko hi super super 'shaani' banaaenge.
@ siddesh- lol. sort of :o
@ hamza- lol. ek patey ki baat bataaoo?
if u don like wat i write na, den u dont need to read or comment on it! i wont mind. REALLY!!! :-)
@ the critics- nah. once i a blue moon
@ drrama queen- thnxx n welcome to d blog :)
@ sunwicked- hie! long tym no c!
merci :)
PS : Love ur background <3
lol good one. :)
Ah. This one is interesting. I loved it. Nice change in narrative and everything. There is a reason why we have so few gentlemen left.. :-)
Batting Eyelids and Dimpled smile, i would have fallen for that:)
hehe..I thought omg Sadiya wrote something like this and I was all happy happy dekhte hai aage kya hota hai and..doh! I come to know what its all about :P
Pretty girls at times think that beauty can make all the work easy, haha but at times they forget brains is also important :D
But beauty with brains is a good combo na ;)
And hey thoda CID types hota toh aur 4 chaand lag jaate aapki post pe :D
Take Care.
pehle to laga ki yeh romance hain...yeh to mystery nikle-khoda pahaad n nikla double pahaad:-)
somethings don't really change-n rarish beauty n dumbish behaviour sadly often go hand in hand:-)
such a fun post!
@ drrama queen- yayyy! i louuuuve u fr sayin dat! u kno i hav taken more time n troubl on it dan anyyyy post on d blog :o
@ felicity- thnx!
@ zeba- hehe but hey dats no xcuse.
@ dhiraj- kya aap yakeen ke saath keh sakte hai ki if one of d 2 wasnt dere den u wudn hav fallen?
@ fatima- aah! ab to bas jaan hi le lo! :P
@ suruchi- anddd u get dis tyms ROTFL COMMENT AWARD!!! khoda pahaad n niklaa doubl pahaad! lol. dats an xpression im nt goin to forget fr longgg!
thnx!
Ok so you have proved us beyond doubt that you can write stories and detective ones at that !!! :)
@ binu- hehe no yaar dere was differenc of public opinion on dis one so wil wrk harder :)
LOL Sadiya is the next best thing after A.C Doyle ;)
Kamikaze speaks nice referal by the way :)
@ abhishek- hehe itni to gud nai hoo im sure :o
kamikaze speaks- say a big hello to her n ask her to write more often :)
Aila......ye kab hua! July ka post ab dikha mujhe?! Hee hee i needed to copyright my name ;) could've bagged a big fat royalty :P :P
Now I understand why I got so many hits! Thank you Sadiya! muhaa!
*thinks* Now I have to create a story with Sadiya's name *evil grin*
hehe andhooooo! :P
story wid my name? *nail biting xpression* :o
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