Monday, February 14, 2011

Humsafar- Part 5


Part 1
Part 2
Part 3
Part 4

As he held her in his arms, she felt herself disregard everything; the pain, the wait or even the anxiety of whether she had exceeded her tenets by a whisker. If only that one moment would last for eternity.

Her intestines cringed with anticipation of the likely outcome as seconds ticked past and nothing happened. They just stood looking at each other in a peaceful frigid land.

One hundred steps it was.

And now for the first time Nysa realised that she had been so absorbed in attaining the goal, so focused in getting to him, that the thought of what she may say when she met him never occurred to her at all. Somehow the feat itself had seemed so incredibly challenging that her imagination never chanced upon her course of action once it had been accomplished.

But the moment had arrived and she didn’t know what to say. What puzzled her though was the look on his face. Marquiz didn’t quite bear a questioning expression. It was rather a knowing gaze. How come?

He had seen her from the time she was a chirpy little girl with wide eyes that wondered at every little mystery of life, to the time she had grown into a demure young woman who lowered her gaze every time a piece of history about him was related. From the time she had looked at him; looked and looked with starry eyes, unaware that he had looked back.
He had known it all along. And he had yearned for her, just as she had for him.

It wasn’t meant to be, he had often thought;He was just another soul lost in space, he had often thought; His love was feeble and handicapped, he had often thought....but he hadn’t accounted for what her love could do for him.

If he was her prize, she was his pride.

As she stuttered to how she may open a sentence and what best to say, he placed his hand on her lips. He fretted what silence had spoken for so many years; words may under cast living up, to the same eloquence.

The feat having been completed, the spell broke and they found themselves in the same old cave. She had brought him back with her. The person she wanted to introduce to her father, the person she loved, the only person she had ever dreamt of a ‘happily ever after’ with.....

Marquiz couldn’t help but endear her restrained vulnerability; and held out her tiny slippers for her...... The ones she couldn’t have done without in the past, the ones she had forgotten all about now. To her soft smile, he melted feeling like the luckiest man ever to have lived.

And yet again, the same thought crossed his mind,

“Main to mar jaaoo agar sochne lag jaaoo usey
Aur woh kitni sahoolat se mujhe sochti hai

Kitni khush-fahem hai wo shakhs ke har mausam main
Ek naye rukh, nayi soorat se mujhe sochti hai

Main to mehdood se lamho main mila tha us-se
Phir bhi wo kitni wazahat se mujhe sochti hai!”*

*sahoolat- convenience, khush-fahem- optimistic, rukh- face, soorat- form, mehdood- constrained, lamho- moments, wazahat- in a detailed/ meticulous way.


*************THE END************


Credits
Rinaya Jena for tagging me at ‘time travel’

7 comments:

sufiyan said...

Nice ending.....I like it....
"Yoon toh hamne hazar hasi dekhe hein
Par TUMSA NAHIN DEKHA!!!!" :D

Blasphemous Aesthete said...

Beautiful, beautiful, beautiful.

Specially the poetic lines... over all, the story was also very, very good and the Princess, was indeed royal, in all aspects. :)

Cheers,
Blasphemous Aesthete

subtlescribbler said...

bahut khoob....the start was fabulous and so is the end. elegant, powerful, touching and ofkors a beautiful narration by u!
and so the love triumphed over everything else...wow..wow! :)
this last couplet is a cherry on top!

sarah

Sadiya Merchant said...

@ sufi- chalo finally its changed from 'pathetic' to 'nice ending'....dhnayavaad bhaijaan!
aur haa gaane main to usne 'laakh' haseen dekhe the na...hehe! :P

@ blaspyyy- im sooo relieved to hear dat... mus say was a bit apprehensiv judgin frm ur scrutiny n attention to specifics....thnx fr followin up n havin such nice things to say :)

@ sarah- my pleasure! ur response really kept me going.....thnx! :)

Princess of The Dreamland said...

Wow... Love Never Fails.. :D

Sadiya Merchant said...

@ princess- lol. don ask. i don even remembr wat i was thinkin wen i wrote dis! :o

Live2cherish said...

your writing never fails to amuse me.